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Documentation for the Omega2 beta firmware
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5.6.1 Device Tree Overview #65

Closed amsiotdeveloper closed 2 months ago

amsiotdeveloper commented 4 months ago

NOTE: _This Subtask is linked to a larger Task List_ticket #44

Task Owner:

Who owns this task and will approve the final deliverables? Lazar

Objectives & Goals:

1. How does this task relate to the value track(s)?

- All of the effort we put into improving our product lines should provide value to our customers.
- We need to be able to clearly articulate the value each improvement will provide in the following three value tracks:
    1. Development - The hardware chapter is important for evaluating the Omega modules for a new project and supporting developers in the development process.
    2. Deployment
    3. Production

2. Create a short statement explaining the objectives and goals for this ticket.

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1. Provide hyperlinks for helpful and related information.

Deliverables or Desired Outcome:

1. What are the task owners expectations?

Date Required By:

1. When is the scope required to be completed?

remingtontr commented 2 months ago

Ready for initial review.

amsiotdeveloper commented 2 months ago

@remingtontr this is really good. One item was missed from the outline so we need to work that in a little better, and I think we need to put a little more thought into one section. Please see comments in the document. Thank you.

remingtontr commented 2 months ago

Gary,

I have reworked the awkward sentence and I think it now sounds better and makes more sense.

I have added in the missed sentence as a NOTE.

Tom Remington


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amsiotdeveloper commented 2 months ago

@remingtontr looks better now. @greenbreakfast this article is ready for your final review/approval. There is just one comment we need your input on so we can keep your intended meaning of the original sentence.

greenbreakfast commented 2 months ago

@remingtontr looks good! I added one comment, after that it's good for a PR