Open yommi1999 opened 7 years ago
Try to rewrite this a little, #37 can help you out, in description of fight make it simple as it can and just mechanic stuff, any visual stuff just write separated also #265 can help you.
-"if the player gets hit he will be stuned unless forced movment is applied" what do you mean by that? like you not get stunned if you moveing? I don't know how to interpretate that.
Also next line is hardly understandable, if even i understand it right.
phase 2 need rewriteing. I can't folow thought processes of it at all :/
in phase 3 you explaining mechanic by visual effect what i don't know what it do, try using if x => y in explaining mechanic like this for eg. if boss stuned 2 times same hero he dash to it and use [abbility name/mechanic].
Thank you for the repost! As Wujekklawy mentioned, the standard format is helpful (though you're pretty close to it). Also, this may sound weird, but the original description of the phases was clearer. I am unsure I would have understood this if I hadn't read the previous post.
Mithras
Arena
Normal arena. Requires enough space to have players encircle him.
Boss Description
The boss will feature a spear and shield. Rest is arbitrary.
Phase 1 (100%-80% HP)
Ability: Piercing spear, [active ability]: boss stabs his spear at a random player and stuns the player. After x seconds the boss will pull out the spear dealing massive damage.
Piercing spear is an AOE spell with a long cast point. Its hitboxes are very similar to Boundless strike.
Piercing spear goes through magic immunity.
Piercing spear obstructs movement
Phase 2 (80%-20% HP)
Ability: Piercing spear, [active ability]: boss stabs his spear at a random player and stuns the player. The boss will put the other end on the ground. After x seconds the boss will pull out the spear dealing massive damage.
Piercing spear is an AOE spell with a long cast point. Its hitboxes are very similar to Boundless strike.
Piercing spear goes through magic immunity.
Piercing spear obstructs movement
Phase 3 (20%-0% HP)
(Increased speed of stabbing) Abilities: Piercing spear, [active ability]: boss stabs his spear at a random player and stuns the player. The boss will put the other end on the ground. After x seconds the boss can pull out the spear dealing massive damage.
One man army, [passive]: The boss only pulls out a spear if all players in the arena are affected by piercing spear.
Piercing spear is an AOE spell with a long cast point. Its hitboxes are very similar to Boundless strike.
Piercing spear goes through magic immunity.
Piercing spear obstructs movement
Optional: Give his shield spell-blocking abilities. When I daydreamed about this guy I imagined him to block all damage coming from above.