The about section is low in the visual hierarchy of the page but it provides useful contextual information about the site. The right hand side location also slightly unbalances the appearance of the page. The list of bodies could further benefit from a little more formatting to improve readability.
Our suggestion is to move the about section above the download and explore headings as shown in the attached wireframe. And to reformat the list of bodies in to a 2 column bullet point list to both balance the page visually and improve readability.
The about section is low in the visual hierarchy of the page but it provides useful contextual information about the site. The right hand side location also slightly unbalances the appearance of the page. The list of bodies could further benefit from a little more formatting to improve readability.
Our suggestion is to move the about section above the download and explore headings as shown in the attached wireframe. And to reformat the list of bodies in to a 2 column bullet point list to both balance the page visually and improve readability.
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