Spelling, grammar, and clarity fixes

OpenMAR / PiTool

Provide interactive interfaces for Pimax products (such as HMD, controllers, base stations, etc.) to users

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Spelling, grammar, and clarity fixes #2

Closed 6J7KZg2f closed 5 years ago

6J7KZg2f commented 5 years ago

Fixed all obvious errors, reworded some janky phrases, added missing translations, etc.

peterhudson commented 5 years ago

Reviewed phrasing changes and they look great. Thanks for going through and suggesting these changes. As a native English speaker, I can say this will be a huge improvement to the level of polish in the PiTool UI.

6J7KZg2f commented 5 years ago

Just checked this out on the morning so this is only as far I got, very nice changes :).

Did consider if it should be "switch Pimax mode" or "switch to Pimax mode" but I guess this form is fine as well.

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I wasn't actually entirely sure about the context of that (and I did these translations by taking the centerpoint between google chinese -> japanese and google chinese -> english, because I don't speak Chinese :D )