1- The draft needs to clarify terms as the reader get lost about which estimate it is being refer throughout the sections.
2- Need to reconcile apparent differences in ideas/resuts across the manuscript. Results require clarification to avoid misunderstanding for interpretation. Maybe clarification of the estimates will help this point.
3- Main message and implication is missing from the draft and sometimes the text goes into too much detail forgetting the overall big picture and importance.
4- Important to discuss the "so what" and "how to move forward".
1- The draft needs to clarify terms as the reader get lost about which estimate it is being refer throughout the sections. 2- Need to reconcile apparent differences in ideas/resuts across the manuscript. Results require clarification to avoid misunderstanding for interpretation. Maybe clarification of the estimates will help this point. 3- Main message and implication is missing from the draft and sometimes the text goes into too much detail forgetting the overall big picture and importance. 4- Important to discuss the "so what" and "how to move forward".