PeaPod is a cloud-connected automated plant growth environment, designed as both a distributed phenotype research tool, and a precision agriculture food production.
[x] Bring character counts down, provide actual character counts
[x] Note any acronyms or jargon terms!!!
[x] Aeroponics
[x] Standardize formatting
[x] Move over-detailed content from general sections (i.e. abstract, description) to more specific sections; reduce redundancy @narvcharv
[x] In addition to the previous, make sure everything is in the appropriate spot (mostly a concern for description A and B, constraints vs performance criteria, etc.)
[x] Citations for everything (and take pictures of source extracts) @JonasMarshall
[x] Check each section's content against the Design Report requirements @JLefebvre55
[x] #90 @narvcharv @nchareunsouk
[x] More emphasis on "standard construction" (i.e. 3x2 for DSFC), applies to:
[x] Description A
[x] Power consumption (All components)
[x] Water consumption (CNet model provided)
[x] Dimensions and Volume (provide a specific construction example)
[x] Mass estimate (decide on an approach to extension for frame)
[x] Description Revisions:
[x] Abstract should be less features, more approach/concept/scope and justification (novel, sustainable, innovative)
[x] Reduce system description detail in A - remember, this is a design concept submission
[x] Mention assumed life support etc. systems in B
[x] Expand on expandability - how is each environment separated? Different kinds of expansion? re: sol'n overview
General revisions: