She Is The Dark One hallway should be wider

[Pfhorrest]

[aaronfreed]

a couple things in the writing here:

[…fuck off windows, the first hathor screen]

Is “They are terrible nightmares” intended here? Otherwise, it might sound better as “they are terrible – they are nightmares” or something along those lines. (Could also use a semicolon.)

“You keep bringing them true” also strikes me as strange wording. “You keep making them true”? “You keep causing them to come true”? Something like that.

[…fuck off again windows. the steps near polygon 382]

[Pfhorrest]

these both appear to be blank black screenshots.

I think both of the terminal text things are correct. “Terrible nightmares” and “bringing them true” both sound fine to me.

On Jul 2, 2020, at 7:41 PM, aaronfreed notifications@github.com wrote:

a couple things in the writing here:

https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/8217916/86424579-efb36980-bcb0-11ea-950f-8f6e1260a575.png Is “They are terrible nightmares” intended here? Otherwise, it might sound better as “they are terrible – they are nightmares” or something along those lines. (Could also use a semicolon.)

“You keep bringing them true” also strikes me as strange wording. “You keep making them true”? “You keep causing them to come true”? Something like that.

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