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Common Questions #198

Closed thisisveryimportant closed 6 years ago

thisisveryimportant commented 6 years ago

Organization

Remove double finger guns

Condense where possible overall in this section!

thisisveryimportant commented 6 years ago

working on this now...

thisisveryimportant commented 6 years ago

pushed up these changes

digijim commented 6 years ago

These changes are merge into Master, therefore can be seen on the staging site

thisisveryimportant commented 6 years ago

i just realized ash and i both used the metaphor of roadmap to describe ERS and Preferences. oops. i was inspired by her lol! new metaphor? or change wording right under Preferences section to pump up our experience?

i.e. Our 50-year commitment to helping all photographers achieve their goals is bar none in the industry. Trust us with your vision. or Our 50-year commitment to helping all photographers achieve their goals is bar none in the industry. You can trust us with your vision.

then use "world-class color tech" phrase somewhere else? bc Stephen has literally on a phone call told someone our color techs are some of the best in the world. and i want to play that up.

thoughts?

thisisveryimportant commented 6 years ago

JK. not working. wording done for today. please excuse ;)