Closed thisisveryimportant closed 6 years ago
working on this now...
pushed up these changes
These changes are merge into Master, therefore can be seen on the staging site
i just realized ash and i both used the metaphor of roadmap to describe ERS and Preferences. oops. i was inspired by her lol! new metaphor? or change wording right under Preferences section to pump up our experience?
i.e. Our 50-year commitment to helping all photographers achieve their goals is bar none in the industry. Trust us with your vision. or Our 50-year commitment to helping all photographers achieve their goals is bar none in the industry. You can trust us with your vision.
then use "world-class color tech" phrase somewhere else? bc Stephen has literally on a phone call told someone our color techs are some of the best in the world. and i want to play that up.
thoughts?
JK. not working. wording done for today. please excuse ;)
Organization
Remove double finger guns
Condense where possible overall in this section!