Proofread Preface and Chapter 1 through 10

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Attached find an annotated PDF document of the book with 714 sticky notes of 
suggested corrections to the text.

To view them, download and install the latest Adobe Reader XI and open the 
document.
To get a list of all sticky notes, from the View menu select Comment and then 
Annotations. See the Comment List.

Common typos/repeating mistakes through the text:
  * “Talk about class/component MyClass” should be “Talk about the MyClass class/component”
  * “Talk about tag <bal>” should be “Talk about the <bla> tag”
  * “Takes in input” should be “Takes as input”

I'll update my copy of the book and continue proof reading starting with 
chapter 11.

Original issue reported on code.google.com by p...@bors.ws on 17 May 2013 at 3:25

Attachments:

• [Wicket free guide-proofread ch1 to ch10.pdf](https://storage.googleapis.com/google-code-attachments/wicket-guide/issue-14/comment-0/Wicket free guide-proofread ch1 to ch10.pdf)

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While referencing to a "paragraph" in the text, replace it with "section".

A paragraph is a distinct section of a piece of writing, usually dealing with a 
single theme and indicated by a new line, indentation, or numbering.

Whereas sections are numbered and made up of one or more paragraphs (unless 
we're talking about the bible which indeed has each section and paragraph 
numbered :)

Original comment by p...@bors.ws on 17 May 2013 at 3:54

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Thank you very much Paul for you contribute! I would like to add your name to 
the front page as proof-reader, if you don't have anything against it.
Your corrections will be applied to the next update of the guide, which should 
be released before the end of May.

Original comment by an.delb...@gmail.com on 17 May 2013 at 6:33

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Hey Andrea,

Should I wait until then before starting with chapter 11 towards the end of the 
book?

Are there a lot of changes between the May 1st edition and the next version of 
the book when it comes to chapter 11 and on? If not, I rather download the new 
version and keep going :)

Original comment by p...@bors.ws on 17 May 2013 at 7:01

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well, my original plan was to release a new version in the next few days. This 
version contains the fixes for issues from 10 to 13. 
Know I will slightly post pone it to see how long it takes to insert your 
corrections. 
If it doesn't take too long and if you think you have the time to complete your 
reading proof before the end of may, I will wait for it to produce one single 
update.
But if we need more time to do everything with calm, I will publish the update 
in accordance with my original plan and I will postpone your corrections to the 
next update.
The most notable change compared to the previous version is section 10.2.5 
where I've replaced the deprecated class AbstractBehavior with the updated 
code. However, the text has not changed so much.

Original comment by an.delb...@gmail.com on 18 May 2013 at 1:27

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Original comment by an.delb...@gmail.com on 22 May 2013 at 10:46

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Original comment by an.delb...@gmail.com on 30 May 2013 at 11:44

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