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fix: Minor issues with dialogue content #15

Closed PraxTube closed 2 months ago

PraxTube commented 3 months ago

Notes on Ionas & Antonius dialogue

Define cooperation better
Stimulation -> Distraction?
Reword Party up, or rather it's unclear and strange, Ionas didn't even decline, rewrite that passage
Whole evolution thing, do I want to keep it? The problem is (partly) that it seems like Antonius is already applying values onto the evolution process

Jotem

ya are -> yer
Start of the sentence use "You" (and perhaps at various other places)

Paladins

flesh them out