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Old Embodied Making commercial site
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Sign in page text #36

Closed MaartenBouten closed 11 years ago

MaartenBouten commented 11 years ago

The two lines of text on the sign in page don't communicate a clear message in my opinion.

"You need to log in to access that page. By signing in using your Linkedin account you agree to the creative commons license under which we share our content."

The second line mixes two messages: 1) you can sign in with your Linkedin account and 2) by signing in you agree to the CC ... .

My suggestion would be: You need to sign in to access that page. You can sign in here with your Linkedin account. By signing in you agree to the creative commons license under which we share our content.

Log in and sign in are both used now. Maybe more consistency?

Groeten Maarten

andrekampert commented 11 years ago

Good suggestion, changed text