joojjs
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5 years ago Feedback: Core Function: Very clearly states what the application is about at the beginning about the main idea and explains the reason behind the simple UI. Continuing how the swiping works with why such images were chosen-> to relate with the quotes. But could explain about more functions/ tabs you had.
Understandable: No problem with dictations/ grammar, user flow is also well explained.
Example: I think there could be varied examples to show the different scenarios/ themes. You said the quotes could be from movies and books as well as motivational quotes. The examples you have right now seem somewhat serious/ philosophical and heavy. If this atmosphere is what you are aiming for then it seems to fit but, since you mentioned movies as well, there could be other varied feels/ moods you can add to show the diversity of quotes -> Greater user pool? And there could also be philosophical quotes even in Disney movies ex) pooh, and etc.
Extra things:
- Have application open when you start talking about the app -> So listeners can start to comprehend the app as you speak, maybe better than seeing your phones screen. Or if you want to still run them through the opening and that first launch/ view experience, maybe you can have another screen- related to your app at first while explaining about it?
- Maybe could add your logo/ name of app on the header -> give a more understanding/ sense of where the users are.
Watch my video and feedback for the explanation. Core Function : Is my presentation explains core function well Understandable : My wording and flow is enough to understand Example : Did I choosed right example to explain