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PubInv / general-purpose-alarm-device

A general purpose alarm device (with software) as a module for medical devices (and others)
https://www.pubinv.org/project/general-purpose-alarm-device-gpad/
GNU Affero General Public License v3.0
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Update README.md #258

Closed MairinOGrady closed 9 months ago

MairinOGrady commented 9 months ago

Possible edits for the alarm device ReadMe.

ForrestErickson commented 9 months ago

There is an instance where Arduino is miss spelled as "Artuino" in the changes.

RobertLRead commented 9 months ago

Dear @MairinOGrady, this is great work --- you are making the text much tighter and clearer. I prefer "a peripheral" to "perirpheral" here on line 9 --- although your style is better "a peripheral" has a special (jargon) meaning in computer engineering, so I'm going to revert that one. But the rest of this is just what we are looking for.

MairinOGrady commented 9 months ago

Thank you @RobertLRead. I am glad this is the style you were looking for, and I will keep in mind the terminology for the next page.