Open ShirRaj opened 5 years ago
You are right, and it can be improved.
Can you take the lead on this one? :)
Sure, no problem :) do you want me to edit the existing notes or just review the next ones?
Pick the one you think is better :)
See DabruEleynu and Tamar Eylam Gindin's post on gender-neutral writing in Hebrew
In all of the examples, you talk about men. The one time you mention a woman, the man is doing the actual work. This creates an effect that women doesn't belong to this place, I'll explain more in person.