[unpleasant] Update editorial suggestions

[SylviaZhaooo]

Resolve most comments in #445.

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[mmcky]

thanks @SylviaZhaooo if you have addressed the comments above. Would you mind clicking on the "Resolved comment". Thanks 👍

[SylviaZhaooo]

thanks @SylviaZhaooo if you have addressed the comments above. Would you mind clicking on the "Resolved comment". Thanks 👍 Thanks for reminding me. I have clicked on all "Resolved comments".

[jstac]

Many thanks @SylviaZhaooo and @mmcky

Just some small changes requested.

[SylviaZhaooo]

Many thanks @SylviaZhaooo and @mmcky

Just some small changes requested.

I made the changes as requested, and the conversations have been resolved.

[jstac]

Many thanks @SylviaZhaooo , much appreciated! merging.