I hope this addresses the notes in #25 around episode 1, specifically. I think it's worth getting this reviewed before looking at another episode!
I feel like there is more to be done on this, but I reckon it will flow better when delivered, even if some of the text could still be cut and refined.
I hope this addresses the notes in #25 around episode 1, specifically. I think it's worth getting this reviewed before looking at another episode!
I feel like there is more to be done on this, but I reckon it will flow better when delivered, even if some of the text could still be cut and refined.