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RachelSa / make-alex-famous-book

A collaborative novel-writing project, featuring Alex's already-famous kid-living-on-a-bus premise.
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chapter two unedited #3

Closed nikymorg closed 6 years ago

nikymorg commented 6 years ago

I didn't read the synopsis and wouldn't let @realAndrewCohn read his chapter to me first, but I remain confident that this is in keeping with those both with respect to plot and overall tone.

nikymorg commented 6 years ago

@RachelSa pls advise how I can add reviewers to my pr. Advise pls.

nikymorg commented 6 years ago

Worried this chapter may draw too heavily on the children's book series 'The Boxcar Kids' not that I remember any of it but there was a boxcar. But I suppose if you have read one romantic, murderous, dystopian YA novel you have read them all.

realAndrewCohn commented 6 years ago

@nikymorg i disagree. I think the cold and nakedness really add a layer of complexity to this already deeply layered novel. 5 stars

RachelSa commented 6 years ago

wowowowo. DC crew is #talent. @nikymorg the fact that you did not read the prompt shows your strong, strong artistic vision.