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“Now, while the militia make up ghost stories about the return of the Egregorians – and I cannot deny the possibility that some of their race survived – the evidence does not bear it out.” Patience stands from his desk and waves an image up onto an otherwise blank wall of his office. “Observe this picture, taken from combat footage captured during an attack one month ago.”
Correction:
“Now, while the militia make up ghost stories about the return of the Egregorians – and I cannot deny the possibility that some of their race survived – the evidence does not bear it out.” Patience stands from their desk and waves an image up onto an otherwise blank wall of the office. “Observe this picture, taken from combat footage captured during an attack one month ago.”
'The office.' could also be typed as "Their office."
Baconside
commented
3 years ago
On page 45 multiple pronouns should be corrected:
“Now, while the militia make up ghost stories about the return of the Egregorians – and I cannot deny the possibility that some of their race survived – the evidence does not bear it out.” Patience stands from his desk and waves an image up onto an otherwise blank wall of his office. “Observe this picture, taken from combat footage captured during an attack one month ago.”
Correction:
“Now, while the militia make up ghost stories about the return of the Egregorians – and I cannot deny the possibility that some of their race survived – the evidence does not bear it out.” Patience stands from their desk and waves an image up onto an otherwise blank wall of the office. “Observe this picture, taken from combat footage captured during an attack one month ago.”
'The office.' could also be typed as "Their office."