[x] Talk about interactions of molecules and atoms with the surfaces
--> added description of adsorption, absorption, and references to DFT work (similar to Etienne and Nicolas' thesis)
[x] List all the sources of helium (transmutation, tritium decay...)
--> added a Section "Particle Sources"
--> modified the figures to show transmutation gas
[x] Mention why ACHLYS wasn't used
[x] Show permeation on the diagrams with molecular recombination
--> added recombination to the figure
[x] Talk about multi-trapping (up to X hydrogen in one vacancy)
--> Added a paragraph on multi-trapping + a figure showing the evolution of the detrapping energy for several defects
[x] Add a "Problem" section explaining the issue we want to solve (ie estimating the tritium inventory in divertors)
--> Restructure the last part of Chap 1 in a "Main issue" section.
--> Key questions are clearly stated
--> The roadmap is now clearer and the outputs of each Chapter is detailed
[x] Mention that plasma facing materials must be electrically conductive
--> couldn't find any reference for electrical conduction itself but added references showing thermal conductivity minimised the impact of arcing (material release from erosion)
[x] Talk about hydrogen blistering
[x] paragraphs 1.5 and 1.6 are too short and "brutal". Maybe they could be merged into a "Problem" section.
[x] Mention that HIT is based on COMSOL.
[x] Add Alan Durif's work on ANSYS
[x] Add Abaqus in the table
[x] Mention TMAP7 is a reference code
[x] Focus on W, Cu, CuCrZr maybe adding a short review of diffusion coefficients and sievert's constant of these key materials
[x] Remove Quiros ref
[x] Describe monoblocks in Chapter 1
[x] talk about performances (explaining why Abaqus was not an option)
[x] Talk about EELS measures for helium bubble pressure (Ialovega's work).
[x] Talk about Xolotl
[x] Chapter 2 diffusion say Soret is neglected
[x] Talk about Soret effect and pressure assisted diffusion in "1.4.1 Diffusion" without adding equations
[x] Remove Al, Be, and EUROFER
[x] Talk about neutron-induced defects
[x] Remove "real life" in Chapter 2.5
[x] MMS try and add a reference
[x] Avoid jargon in MMS (eg super convergence with P2 elements)
[x] Add the surface to the potential energy diagram
[x] Extend the breeding blanket part
[x] Extend the safety part
[x] Talk about interactions of molecules and atoms with the surfaces --> added description of adsorption, absorption, and references to DFT work (similar to Etienne and Nicolas' thesis)
[x] List all the sources of helium (transmutation, tritium decay...) --> added a Section "Particle Sources" --> modified the figures to show transmutation gas
[x] Mention why ACHLYS wasn't used
[x] Show permeation on the diagrams with molecular recombination --> added recombination to the figure
[x] Talk about multi-trapping (up to X hydrogen in one vacancy) --> Added a paragraph on multi-trapping + a figure showing the evolution of the detrapping energy for several defects
[x] Add a "Problem" section explaining the issue we want to solve (ie estimating the tritium inventory in divertors) --> Restructure the last part of Chap 1 in a "Main issue" section. --> Key questions are clearly stated --> The roadmap is now clearer and the outputs of each Chapter is detailed
[x] Mention that plasma facing materials must be electrically conductive --> couldn't find any reference for electrical conduction itself but added references showing thermal conductivity minimised the impact of arcing (material release from erosion)
[x] Talk about hydrogen blistering
[x] paragraphs 1.5 and 1.6 are too short and "brutal". Maybe they could be merged into a "Problem" section.
[x] Mention that HIT is based on COMSOL.
[x] Add Alan Durif's work on ANSYS
[x] Add Abaqus in the table
[x] Mention TMAP7 is a reference code
[x] Focus on W, Cu, CuCrZr maybe adding a short review of diffusion coefficients and sievert's constant of these key materials
[x] Remove Quiros ref
[x] Describe monoblocks in Chapter 1
[x] talk about performances (explaining why Abaqus was not an option)
[x] Talk about EELS measures for helium bubble pressure (Ialovega's work).
[x] Talk about Xolotl
[x] Chapter 2 diffusion say Soret is neglected
[x] Talk about Soret effect and pressure assisted diffusion in "1.4.1 Diffusion" without adding equations
[x] Remove Al, Be, and EUROFER
[x] Talk about neutron-induced defects
[x] Remove "real life" in Chapter 2.5
[x] MMS try and add a reference
[x] Avoid jargon in MMS (eg super convergence with P2 elements)
[x] Add the surface to the potential energy diagram
[x] Add examples of TDS ramps (0.5 K/s, etc)
[x] Add refs for Section 1.2.3
[x] Section 1.2.3 write only "eroded tungsten"
[x] Remove CFC improved plasma performances (discussion ongoing)
[x] Chap 1 for diffusion, trapping, surface processes: describe the process before describing the equations
[x] Say that the the diffusion coefficient can be calculated by DFT
[x] remove pseudo-potentials
[x] MD can also be parameterised "manually"
[x] Etienne's gonna send a ref for experimental diffusion coefficient
[x] page 12 ref equation 1.9 is wrong
[x] remove 3D potential energy diagram
[x] Add for all v in finite element formulations
[x] put eq 2.35 before 2.34 --> no cause the parameter is used to determine is the effective diffusivity regime
[x] Introduce D_effective
[x] Eq 2.36, what threshold of the infinite sum
[x] The MMS section is a bit brutal
[x] recombination order (discussion ongoing)
[x] detail the 1 kg T inventory
[ ] Reference Isabelle Moreau thesis
[ ] add the reference where they solve with respect to mu (see Interface paper)
[ ] maybe add the implementation of the heat equation formulation in FEniCS --> complicated cause requires a long script (not just a couple of lines)
[ ] Talk about surface trapping
[ ] Add something about Ion Beam Analysis for profilometry
[ ] add a few words about the nonlinear solver (mumps, umfpack, etc...)
[ ] Replace Ialovega's TDS with Ogorodnikova's