For the top description, currently it says: "I'm John Torrens Entrepreneur, Educator, TEDx Speaker, Author." Let remove "I'm John Torrens" and just say: "Entrepreneur, Educator, TEDx Speaker, Author." The subtitle is fine for now (the one that says "Professor, entrepreneur, and executive, leading ventures in therapy services and teaching entrepreneurship at Syracuse University for 15+ years.")
For the top description, currently it says: "I'm John Torrens Entrepreneur, Educator, TEDx Speaker, Author." Let remove "I'm John Torrens" and just say: "Entrepreneur, Educator, TEDx Speaker, Author." The subtitle is fine for now (the one that says "Professor, entrepreneur, and executive, leading ventures in therapy services and teaching entrepreneurship at Syracuse University for 15+ years.")