joejobst
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4 years ago Too complex with too many issues not addressed hell, sinners, demons, stone statues, too complex and messy imo. lose the stone statue aspect at least imo. I need to get on board with him as a Bad guy, preferably further torturing sinners, I wish they were bound more to the ground, humanoid characters and you could tell they were scum bags (drug dealers) (crooked lawyers, prisoners, Odd mix with cohesion and appeal, better clear enemies the stone is odd, I like the comment of grown. but I like bound even better. I understand the scope concern of the boss idea, but it being stone I would think would be problematic or less believable as how could he take over your territory. -My two cents... I think the boss needs to be a flying demon version, that consists of 90% features of the player character, (to answer AI issues, make her fly and behave more drone like) maybe feminine. or a love interest, then after beating each other up you fall in love, happy ending or she tricks you and steals your kingdom leaving us with a hook to play more. Evil Demon Dentist lover, man thats sick.... think of some sick twists like this.
Marty - nice details on mood boards. Boss needs more structure more grandure - Darth Vader has his own space. This doesn't feel like a throne room. Walla - Dentist tools - like we are inside the dentist office prople screaming Ryland - look at dentist tools - like a mallet. Rene - dentist fix teeth - I'm confused Ryaland - maybe they all love pain because they are demons. David - there are no rules to how demons are depicted. Cesar - dentists chair - what elements can you bring in Marty make a list of dentisty and teethlike - how about abbsesses? What if the had crowns to the bad guys to indicat that they are more difficult Rene - weird combo of teeth on character - looks like dinosaour claws David - agony - room of teeth and gums biological v of Hell - teeth door. look at it it. Cesar - bloody spit is needed Ryland - How is boss not an animated asset? He looks real but it is made of stone - that is confusing. Stone statue real teeth placed. Scott - it is a little overcooked. Ryland - not broken but needs more thought
Eric - Add your name to github profile!!