joejobst
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4 years ago I did not vote for this because of scope concerns and a lack of clarity. -Odd cohesion between the story of the scarecrows, the mouse and the Ravens, I don't get it. Its overly complex and I don't understand the perilous need. -Objectives are not clear and don’t make sense. Odd combinations. -Scale looked like a good start but I still feel like the scarecrows are too big and the pumpkins too small. -I need to know a definite setting as each farm biome can be different from one another. is it a pumpkin patch on a Orchard or vineyard, or house or dairy or corn or soy what geographic location is it, All this will determine the background vista, The cypress bushes don't cut it for me... what is it, an Italian farm as cypress bushes are not a midwest staple, the fences could be good but would not logically look that way except for the small pumpkin patch... also the believability of why all those bails are placed in that manner needs clarified. -The lack of clarity leads me to believe its not planned enough to give me scope concerns. I was close on this, and believe you can fix a lot by nailing some thoughts down to get my vote.
Ryland - shadow isn't enough - need a cutscene crow attack when we are detected Rene - how does the hat stay on top of the pumpkin? Should possiblely be a hud item rather sitting on the pumpkin Morgan - Humor, but music is somber. SOmething needs to change with the pacing of the game to match the humor of the tone. Marty - should shhot the game the perspective of your second mood painting. I'm a mouse looking up at this giant world Mike - might help with scope and vistas Jo - is it a new england farm, or a nebraska farm? need to define that better. Marty + cesar go pro on a RC car perspective. Scott - feels like the world goes on and on. Morgan - easy thing is to put a fence You have cypruss trees in your mood painting that doesn't make sense Rene - midday is the worst time of day to go out painting. Morgan - look at plants vs zombies garden warfare. they have solved a lot of problems. Eric - nice paintings!!