joejobst
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4 years ago I did not vote for this because of clarity and scope concerns, and your Viz Dev, is going backwards. Story is still too complicated, the sense of what is catching you and why. You need to explain your mechanic better as its very cool, but no one got it right away, and it will require additional debug planning on making sure its satisfying. Monster truck idea is much better than a race car or a bulldozer or something, race car does not say I will knock you back. Monster Truck with a plow??? PLOW KING! haha, I digress. The terrain and detail of this is a small scale there a LARGE scope concerns with this. Fixable cool idea still needs a fair amount of refinement. Viz dev and lighting needs a large amount of work so I know you are planning everything in scope and have a good understanding of layout, placement and big picture aesthetics.
Marty - ear is confusing. UI either tells me the state or the status. Right now it doesn't inform my decision making. Mike - maybe there is a nightlight Mouse traps, Mr Microphone Rene - put the wind up meter on the toy. Marty - give him a power up too. Morgan - you are just copying toys. What is your spin? Eric - Compelling and creative mechanic! Marty - you have the scale right. Congrats! David - what if the kid draws faces on things and they come to life. Marty - branchin paths maybe?