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RinglingGameArt / 2020_Junior_Prepro

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R1 Faculty Feedback - Justin #21

Open egingric opened 4 years ago

egingric commented 4 years ago

Marty - could add splines to kelp as well Rene -you got the cieling hight right? David - nuke the crosshair Cesar - might need a subtitle on the title. Morgan - could you use the pen tool to draw those arrows on your top down map? More gags - make people laugh out loud. Make your own velvet paintings Marty yellow markers in the eithies? Foil wallpaper! David - miami vice - doesn't look like blood dragon. David - maybe a tech nine Marty - you have a lot of complex material - itemize those more clearly Ryland doesn't like the env central asset

Eric - Add your real name into your github profile!!

joejobst commented 4 years ago

I did not vote for this because of scope concerns as well as overall bland content. -Large prop list here for this full condo... yours was far too small. full of materials and objects. not sold on the set pieces. A very bland penthouse make it interesting. i like the gator prop but not much else its all the VERY rough viz dev. Why is the fish tank even in tact?
TELL A STORY WITH THE MURDER SCENE! Its not thought out whatsoever. The item list in a condo needs to be better thought out. The type of room right now is a mixed bag. I have a lot of experience with the make these types of rooms (drug dealer murder scene rooms), and their content must be exciting, and yours is very bland, and will not showcase well and has no solid cohesion.