joejobst
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4 years ago Joe Largest concern here is Character, its the weakest of all the Viz Dev, as every other aspect has more cohesive style and functionality on what it represents, and is far less cute. Needs better harmony between character and environment, just no idea what it is based on shape... a vampire pill?? I get Gothy vampire pill guy from that concept? is that what you want, if so more of the environment needs to match that wackiness quarky type imagery. but likely easier to develop character further. Your environment could be far out of scope as when in gameplay it leaves room for possible vistas, I almost did not vote for it because of this lack of background clarity
Marty - you had my vote early on. One suggestion - cut away to a side camera when he gulps something. Walla - comical? target image is very spooky Marty always giv yourelf three more feet of extra rootball Rene - hitting the right flavor - push the natural feeling - what would be inside the body - feels very safe right now. David - flood levels in Halo - which were inspired by prey. Scorn. Marty - put a limit on the character so he can't eat too much. too full until I get rid of it. Morph target and keep all the limbs the same Morgan - look at biohazard suits Ryland - more verticalality to go with human body. marty - strong presentation!