RinglingGameArt / 2020_Junior_Prepro

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R1 Faculty Feedback - Maddie #24

Open egingric opened 4 years ago

egingric commented 4 years ago

Cesar - appreciate that you sourced actual parts on the spray guns! Ryland - you are pitching a biome but your map looks like a bull dozer made a road. Cesar - viz dev - needs more contrast between the clean and the grungy Scott - how does the grunge form? does it start from the bottom? Why does it start? Marty where to lotus flowers grow? You may need some sort of water solution. Lotus are an invasive species. The two things don't go together. They will fight. Rene - Lotus is an essence. Marty - maybe it is just an artistic pattern rather than actual flowers.

joejobst commented 4 years ago

Joe Please give me a better sense of your environment -I want more plant types, rock and soil types, and grunge types. -I want way more textures and conveying everything you are using. -I would NOT use a lotus and water here in your biome, potentially just have a well or fountain outcropping in select locations with the Lotus inside, recurring every 20 sec after obtained or something. (as the water here almost did not get you my vote for over scope concerns) Viz dev and over sheets here did NOT convey your biome enough imo, it will need far more research.