RinglingGameArt / 2020_Junior_Prepro

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R2 Crit Feedback - Vicki #33

Open egingric opened 4 years ago

egingric commented 4 years ago

Ryland - If we can see into the buildings it will raise scope. We need to be able to see backdrops of the outside of the city - sci fi city street has to be four times the width - room for the droids and speeder bikes. Over-scoped for one person. Mike - supposed to be back alleyways Ryland - OK, but I don't think there would be back allys in sci fi city. Need to seel the idea that we are in a back ally - back allys have thier own problems - they need more set dressing. Morgan - that sidewalk is too skinny. Different archectecture mashed toegther and doesn't make sense together. Rene - Painting is dystopic which seems like it would be devoid of plants, but there is a plant outside, would be inside and sheltered. Rene - french kiss - takes a plant out to the outskirt's of town. Morgan - this seems similar to kaitlins project how did wshe do? Marty - She struggled. Marty - Thinks the player moves too slow.