RinglingGameArt / 2020_Junior_Prepro

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R2 Crit Feedback - Alex and Stephanny #34

Open egingric opened 4 years ago

egingric commented 4 years ago

Marty - too much eye travel between UI and game. Morgan - Architecture is a soup. I don't know what the stroy is. THere is no story there is just stuff. Can we use another word other than corruption? It has become a catch all phrase. Marty Location in Portigal Ryal Gardens sited as a prominant art test by a certain company. Look at the witness for light puzzles - Ophan text on your presentation Ryland - aggree that there is a lack of coeision. WHy is your world so bright and pretty when there is supposed to be all this curruption? We should be going into the pits and lighting them up before we come up and finish. - Using dynamic lighting? Or baked? If you can see your shadows they may look broken. You are going to have a huge technical struggle trying to get that to run at frame rate. Are you doing destructibles? Marty Look at God of war - they used panning UVs alpha and displacement. What are the main character's special abilities? Its seems like a missed oppoutunity Morgan - Important to get narrative right. What are the origens of these people? Figure out what the story pivots around. Rene - Light based - assume the light will go out if she is not around - you are going to struggle with how to find your character - If she is desaturated and the background is desaturated. Marty - Are these feathers? Eric - Don't just sraight rip off Gaudi on your cathedral spires