RinglingGameArt / 2020_Junior_Prepro

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R2 Crit Feedback - Chris, Ken and Randy #35

Open egingric opened 4 years ago

egingric commented 4 years ago

Eric - hard to read small text on your presentation. Choose a better font. Ryland - Don't see why it needs to be built together by three people. Maybe there is a giant fissure that travels throught all the environments. Scot - I like the design elements. Marty - I don't feel like you addressed my notes but the project feels more coehsive. I see growth and potential that it could be a three person project. Morgan - Love the bodies of Pompie and how you echo that later on. You need more iconic things like that. Hia Sophia section could have fingers holding things - feather in the cap at the end - the boss is a melting together of human bodies. A golumn. Rene - fusion between the current concept and the golumn idea could be cool Marty - Look at Hagra - ancient kingdom. Procedural architecture opportunities? Morgan - strong zbrush skills will be required Ryland - seems like a good team form a skills and abilites perspective. Morgan - look at mannerest gardens - step on stones and get squirted. Marty - unclear on kens mechanic because it went by too fast. Jo - The video lacks a lot of technical things that you need to overcome. The video is lacking. Ryland - Don't put candles. Think about your light sources. Cesar - love the hands on the walls - maybe jewlery on the hands.