Ryland - This seems much better put together than your first round pitch.
Rene - why am I picking up the detector?
Scott - Maybe if it's in her briefcase that she just brought in.
Morgan - there are a lot of visual opportunities in this.
Cesar - get some help with the student learning center to make your ideas more readable
Morgan - tell the story of the ghosts with some of these assets. Maybe the ghosts ar related and you can see it on your device. Try to find places to embellish and enrich your story.
Marty - How do I use my intelligence to solve the problem of where these ghosts are at? I got too many casts - gotta keep em out of the kids bedrooms before I leave the house - gotta go get the broom - can you make you game require the same amount of intellence as it takes to move four cats into one room in a house?
Mike - making noise
Ryland - or ghost buster traps.
Morgan - detector device lights up like sting from LOTR, but then you shake it and makes the sound to chae them
Ryland - This seems much better put together than your first round pitch. Rene - why am I picking up the detector? Scott - Maybe if it's in her briefcase that she just brought in. Morgan - there are a lot of visual opportunities in this. Cesar - get some help with the student learning center to make your ideas more readable Morgan - tell the story of the ghosts with some of these assets. Maybe the ghosts ar related and you can see it on your device. Try to find places to embellish and enrich your story. Marty - How do I use my intelligence to solve the problem of where these ghosts are at? I got too many casts - gotta keep em out of the kids bedrooms before I leave the house - gotta go get the broom - can you make you game require the same amount of intellence as it takes to move four cats into one room in a house? Mike - making noise Ryland - or ghost buster traps. Morgan - detector device lights up like sting from LOTR, but then you shake it and makes the sound to chae them