RinglingGameArt / 2020_Junior_Prepro

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R2 Crit Feedback - Victor #38

Open egingric opened 4 years ago

egingric commented 4 years ago

Eric - Key is before the door in all your interactions. That is a major problem Ryland - that was super easy. Morgan - there is no landmarking no peekaboo views - I have a soft spot for space wrecks - so be forewarned. Currently lacks imagination on all fronts. Mike - I would expect the power to be gone if it is an old wreck Scott - put cyro pod first then you go around and collect the power cells Ryland - maybe the trench is the path that it crashed on. Scott - I like the idea that we are choking and running out of oxygen but the env is super nice. Ryland Tin can ship is crushed have to go thru tight space that is going to create anxiety Morgan - raise tree up o root ball have the ship up in the tree - you have a can in a pit and that is not enough Marty - too much the same - change the pov or the lens You are about the equivalent of two of the rooms we are sitting in? OK I am convinced that is withen scope. Go heavy with atmospherics - different maturation stages of foliage Rene - sell the deceivingly beautiful