RinglingGameArt / 2020_Junior_Prepro

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R2 Crit Feedback - Dawn #39

Open egingric opened 4 years ago

egingric commented 4 years ago

Morgan - last pitch about overcoming anxiety felt like it had purpose. This just feels pedestriean. Doesn't have the thoughtfulness. David - I don't understand why she is a side character. Seems like it is just stuff. Character's cloathing shy would she have sackcloths tied around her legs? Rene - stating to look like a garter belt. Overall it lacks creativity - my sophomores have the same problems I feel bad for the slimes. Maybe push towards the maniacal? Weapon is just sitting there. Lost oppoutunity. Morgan - can switch the slime out with a dragon and it wouldn't matter. David - maybe she turns out to be the bad guy Eric - what if are playing as the slime and the little girl is killing our friends and family Ryland - splashed slime on things is a hard technical challenge to overcome. Basically need a precast-ed destructible that spawns when you need it. Marty - exotic version of Unreal has soft bodies. Maybe you could use it. WIth your instuctor approval. NVIDIA FLEX Maybe slimes roll up onto critters and make them fly away Ryland - we built a lava lamp material last year in the materials class, maybe we could use that. Marty - shoot ac over someone's head and it knock's them out