RinglingGameArt / 2020_Junior_Prepro

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R2 Crit Feedback - Alex Boyd #42

Open egingric opened 4 years ago

egingric commented 4 years ago

Scot - need a steady camera for the pipe puzzle Morgan - I want to see opportunity to increase the difficulty Marty - can we have way more than three pipe puzzles? Morgan - The tree is an anomaly. looks cut and pasted in. build the tile around t to make it look more nurtured, or break up the tiles more. The baths look interesting and I like the forge. But the water spirits are still too much like a simple emoji Marty - the root structure of a tree is as big as a canopy. Maybe have roots coming down thru the pipes. Jo - make things more lumpy and more distorted due to the tree

Rene - piping arrangement could be a wall art, more artistically designed? Laika - push it to be more wonky to impress studios with your eye. Morgan - Steam punk igloos Cesar - make the ghosts more relaxed in the water. Didn't realize that they had bodies. Scott Jo - maybe push thre tree towards the back, not in the center. Mike - when you walk thry the door it should be a great reveal of the tree. Ryland - in my head it seems like it should be more visually sophisticated and more beautiful. Marty scope is there, gameplay is there, but the coeiesion is still missing. Rene - it is a cool and fresh idea. Marty - maybe each one of the baths has a different healing power Jo - maybe one is more elictrical, one is more steam. Less redundancy Rene - maybe wispy hands?