RinglingGameArt / 2020_Junior_Prepro

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R2 Crit Feedback - Madi and Sarah #44

Open egingric opened 4 years ago

egingric commented 4 years ago

Eric - seems like a backwards idea to have a long range weapon, that I am forced to only use at short range. Morgan - unbelievably, I do not have any scope issues Character does not look like it fits in with your world. Lightening is OK, but it look like a marvel character due to floating torso and things that are dangling off. Marty - Does the anti-matter in the world feel out of place? Morgan - no. Mike - it's a black hole. Start trying to leverage the physics of that. Jo - I wish there was a dark Hindu type of god so that this blended in a little with that kind of reference. Cesar - I wish the hands on the statue opened in a more realistic way Ryland - only a little over scoped. Look for something to give us more interest. Anti matter doesn't make any sense to me. Archetecture doesn't read sun kingdom. Much more elegant refined, Rene - more selestial Morgan - Cultural appropriations - be on guard. Mike - player character is slightly terrifying Cesar - pants are not going to deform correctly, long hair and then something over that... it adds to the complexity Marty - Apex Destruction - paint wights on the cloth in Unreal. Let the dynamics do the wrinkles Rene - she feels like she is in princess mode. She should be in Laura Croft mode. Marty - is there any trade of economy going on in this space? More evidence of trade, what to they trade, what do they get before there was the corruption?