Scott - Huge wall of text on Summary page - shorten to 4 - 5 sentences.
Michael - All caps types is almost never a good idea. too much text for ALL CAPS
Michael - Uncomfortable tangents on Pillars of Design
Marty - possibly more specific than "Oriental" ?
Animated Central Asset - more dramatic contrast
Env Central Asset
Michael - explain this on the slide - modkit for page
Marty - Show us how the modkit is going to work-
Marty - how do these pieces fit together?
callouts could be enough
Level Map
Mood Painting 1
Michael - Hand receding into darkness - gradient
Marty - a little more perspective.
Michael - audience silhouettes in front
Marty - re-cycle puppet models for audience
Key Props
Colson is into the gecko bell thing
Marty - potential for dynamic assets are cool
Michael - small 3/4 on #5
Mood Painting 2
Blake - to much black. can't see the audience.
Michael - use your curtains to frame and create theatrical feel
Logo Michael - Puppet legs cut off
Scott - Huge wall of text on Summary page - shorten to 4 - 5 sentences. Michael - All caps types is almost never a good idea. too much text for ALL CAPS Michael - Uncomfortable tangents on Pillars of Design Marty - possibly more specific than "Oriental" ?
Animated Central Asset - more dramatic contrast
Env Central Asset Michael - explain this on the slide - modkit for page Marty - Show us how the modkit is going to work- Marty - how do these pieces fit together? callouts could be enough
Level Map
Mood Painting 1 Michael - Hand receding into darkness - gradient Marty - a little more perspective. Michael - audience silhouettes in front Marty - re-cycle puppet models for audience
Key Props Colson is into the gecko bell thing Marty - potential for dynamic assets are cool Michael - small 3/4 on #5
Mood Painting 2 Blake - to much black. can't see the audience. Michael - use your curtains to frame and create theatrical feel