Logo
Michael - site the background source more cleanly
Michael - better framing
Michael - extra color in the logo
Marty - look for visual cues that convey wind
Summary
"powerfrom"
justification on text "feels like" should be left to break connection to last line of text
hard to make out Plays Like
Pillars of Design
repeating background image
maybe one more word - anchor the tone
Map
scale reference, keep polishing
Marty likes level boards and so does Scott
Mood Painting 1
no progress in weeks
cultural reference how was this made?
set dressing
text tangent upper left
Rigged Central Asset
why does it still look like an ice cream scooper?
visual connection to environment fans - repetition of larger fans
Props
Turbines
props need to be streamlined to match up with pillar design callout
Logo Michael - site the background source more cleanly Michael - better framing Michael - extra color in the logo Marty - look for visual cues that convey wind
Summary "powerfrom" justification on text "feels like" should be left to break connection to last line of text hard to make out Plays Like
Pillars of Design repeating background image maybe one more word - anchor the tone
Map scale reference, keep polishing Marty likes level boards and so does Scott
Mood Painting 1 no progress in weeks cultural reference how was this made? set dressing text tangent upper left
Rigged Central Asset why does it still look like an ice cream scooper? visual connection to environment fans - repetition of larger fans
Props Turbines props need to be streamlined to match up with pillar design callout