RinglingGameArt / 2020_Junior_Prepro

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R1 Crit Feedback - alex b #7

Open egingric opened 4 years ago

egingric commented 4 years ago

Marty - smoke calms bees. When the match goes out it emits smoke. could be a risk reward. Smoke calms the bee down but I can't see where I am going. Or fire propigates. Shape language is not going far enough - ten times more Walla - visual targets are too realistic. Rene paranorman - hardly any angularity to your bjects. Lamp needs to be pushed - I can show you some simple techniques. Bozx trolls David - Ren n Stimpy? Morgan - Little nightmares = structural playfulness Rene - more afraid of mouse than bees. Jo - I agree. I can't relate to ewither the bee or the mouse. Change the name to make story more clear. Fun gameplay. But inconsistencies. Marty - bees are well organized - should they be more orderly? dreamworks bee movie.

joejobst commented 4 years ago

I did not vote for this because of scope concerns. Scope concerns with destruction of the environment. AND larger environment needing macro detail in stylization Hive organics will also be scope concern Bees vs Mouse is tough sell for me I don’t understand it… uncertain who is good and bad with the steal and the clear story element between and why he would "bee" there with character look and need and who these characters are. why can't they all just coexist bro? ;) seriously though I get the home invasion, but I think a redesign of the character to try and roll the queen hive away so they all depart would be better, or is that what you are doing and I missed something?