Summary
Michael - Streamline first 2 sentences. Content is good structure needs work.
Colson - wrong to
Michael -not crazy about the font.
Map
Michael - Add player size
Character
Marty - Crossbow not reading. Pose character to provide more context.
Env Central Asset - Sunstone Altar
Michael - where do doors and pieces of stone go when they slide in and out?
Michael - remove black line work - doesn't support volumetirc shape
Modkit
Michael - some of your elements are to thin
Summary Michael - Streamline first 2 sentences. Content is good structure needs work. Colson - wrong to Michael -not crazy about the font.
Map Michael - Add player size
Character Marty - Crossbow not reading. Pose character to provide more context.
Env Central Asset - Sunstone Altar Michael - where do doors and pieces of stone go when they slide in and out?
Michael - remove black line work - doesn't support volumetirc shape
Modkit Michael - some of your elements are to thin
Key Props Michael - these look more volumetric
WIP Marty - work on atmosphere and lighting first
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