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R3 - Vizdev mock crit Colson #75

Open scarrollrcad opened 4 years ago

scarrollrcad commented 4 years ago

Logo Marty - no sense of time or setting. Michael - consider another font treatment for Greek architecture

Summary Michael - Long sentence Capital letters feel like a different font

Pillars of Design pillars don't have to be the same height

Map Player size re-work the start symbol - why is it demonic?

Player Character Michael - why are his eyes staring into our soul? Marty - the hooves rig will take extra time in senior spring are you committed to doing this? Michael - fur treatment needs variation Michael - to much shoulder from 3/4 view

Key Props Michael - WHY isn't your calendar part of your title background Roman numerals mixed in with Greek? Marty - doesn't say Imposing Michael - where is the symmetry? exaggerate the stylization Michael - procedure pottery design Michael - Fill in negative spaces to make the poly budget Michael - Create a dome like structure with overhanging tree

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