Marty - Background circle could be a speaker
tilt it 5 degrees
Michael - increase size of capital letters
Michael - all caps spacing is weird
Michael - ground plane is creating a tangent - looks like an accident
Michael - spray cans are barely reading just crop in
Map
Michael - Player size / scale
Scott - levelboards to call out story moments / tag areas / exploration. Justify the exploration.
Scott - update map to show off your reveal opportunities
Character
Marty - Backview drawing is lacking volume
Marty - Consider going bigger with the front view
Props
Marty - think about the ground plan having puddles and being a wet set
Marty and Scott - where is the cyber-urban?
Central Asset
Michael - you're losing your bottom right edge
Marty - think about origin story of this item (Alyx hands reference)
Mood Painting 1
Michael - left side is dead
Marty - is this a boss fight?
Michael - light source location
Alleyway
Whats the focal point?
Streetlamps / light source will help anchor this
overall image is to bright
Robot generated graffiti looks like what?
Check library for graffiti resources
Props - Blake
Michael - Do you want these to read like hand-made or high-end?
People still like big amplifiers
Speaker Throne might have to be re-worked as well.
Character - Blake
Michael - refine edges they are to fuzzy. Fur treatment smudge tool
Michael - fingers look broken. pointing down.
Marty - explore origin story signifiers - construction, unique dance move, etc.
Marty - consider color or marking associations between Boss, Grunts, and Player Character
Speaker Throne
whats the origin theory? doesn't look comfortable?
Linda - juke box designs may provide inspiration
Logo
Marty - Background circle could be a speaker tilt it 5 degrees Michael - increase size of capital letters Michael - all caps spacing is weird Michael - ground plane is creating a tangent - looks like an accident Michael - spray cans are barely reading just crop in
Map Michael - Player size / scale Scott - levelboards to call out story moments / tag areas / exploration. Justify the exploration. Scott - update map to show off your reveal opportunities
Character Marty - Backview drawing is lacking volume Marty - Consider going bigger with the front view
Props Marty - think about the ground plan having puddles and being a wet set Marty and Scott - where is the cyber-urban?
Central Asset Michael - you're losing your bottom right edge Marty - think about origin story of this item (Alyx hands reference)
Mood Painting 1 Michael - left side is dead Marty - is this a boss fight? Michael - light source location
Alleyway Whats the focal point? Streetlamps / light source will help anchor this overall image is to bright
Robot generated graffiti looks like what?
Check library for graffiti resources
Props - Blake Michael - Do you want these to read like hand-made or high-end? People still like big amplifiers Speaker Throne might have to be re-worked as well.
Character - Blake Michael - refine edges they are to fuzzy. Fur treatment smudge tool Michael - fingers look broken. pointing down. Marty - explore origin story signifiers - construction, unique dance move, etc.
Marty - consider color or marking associations between Boss, Grunts, and Player Character
Speaker Throne whats the origin theory? doesn't look comfortable? Linda - juke box designs may provide inspiration
REFERENCES
Martin MurphyToday at 2:17 PM https://youtu.be/GP3437usvH4
https://www.geek.com/games/game-of-the-year-def-jam-icon-1688985/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ecDYUjUDW4
design the vfx to match beat board and the dance move https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/690591619098869760/699688693623161033/neonpowers_concept01.png?width=1064&height=598
https://issuu.com/graffiti-magazine
https://www.graffitiartmagazine.com/en/urban-contemporary-art-magazine/