17. Requirements section could be reframed to "requirements of a solution in the pursuit of these goals", but pithier. From Li Chen [after ietf 115] #17
Response and revision summary: The draft focuses on the "Requirements" that captures practical issues. The requirement section of the draft has been updated by clarifying which kind of requirements we are talking about and making the listed requirements look more practical.
Response and revision summary: The draft focuses on the "Requirements" that captures practical issues. The requirement section of the draft has been updated by clarifying which kind of requirements we are talking about and making the listed requirements look more practical.