EliSeland
commented
11 months ago I have:
- removed variants of combined words, e.g. reuse, re-use, re use > third variant deleted
- added two-word variant of ecotourism and bioeconom* throughout (#148)
- 2.4. action approach: deleted old version of interpretation as new one had been written
- corrected some misspellings throughout (sewege, emphesise)
Comments:
- 12.2 phrase 3: There is a suggestion in #154 to move some terms from phrase 3 to 1, "Take out generic terms and incorporate into phrase 1 (e.g. (("saving" OR "save$" OR "conserv" OR "efficien") NEAR/5 ("use" OR "using" OR "usage" OR "utili" OR "consumption")) OR (("sustainab" OR "responsib" OR "environmental" OR "ecological" OR "eco" OR "green") NEAR/5 ("consumption" OR "consume$" OR "consumer$" OR "design" OR "technolog*")" - this is not done, was it tested?
- 12.2 noted change in phrase 4: land OR soil moved to be combined with "resources" OR "minerals". Is done in topic, but not action, is that intended?
- 12.3: Documentation needs updating to take into account the fact that two phrases have been merged (#149)
- 12.5: Topic - noted change in phrase 1: "Relatively large structural change that changes the focus away from waste generally, to reductions in waste and waste generation - see the string itself for changes." First part is same as corresponding action string – perhaps worth mentioning in documentation? And perhaps the wording shoud be harmonized, so that in both approaches it says it is about "reducing waste and waste generation"?
- 12.6: Comment in (#151) about using the SCP string (suppose it is meant in phrase 2, as it says "(as used in phrase 1)") - if correctly understood, it has not been implemented - has it been tested?
- 12.8: Noted that ; "education for sustainable development is added as a stand-alone term (#91)" - is that so? It looks to me as if it has been removed - I may misunderstand, but perhaps best to check? I also find the documentation of phrase 1 a little unclear - perhaps consider rewording? Also look at grammar of last sentence of documentation for phrase 2. For phrase 2, noted that "eco-label*" was added, but it is "eco-labels" and "eco-labelling" that is added, is that intended/ok?
- 12.a: The interpretation is a bit heavy - I wonder - is it "the promoting capacity of developing countries for sustainable consumption and production" (= as it is now, action approach), or "the capacity of developing countries for promoting sustainable consumption and production" (to me the latter is easier to grasp, but unsure if something goes missing?
- 12.a: noted "capacity terms now the same in both phrases", but looks like "technological capacity" is in phrase 2, but not 1
- 12.a: not quite sure all the comments/suggestions in (#92) are addressed, a bit hard to follow (terms suggested used alone have been removed), perhaps take an extra check?
- 12.b documentation - says specifying terms were "found from" - is it better to say "found in" or "taken from"?
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Edit SDG12
Target 12.1
standardsto be plural only when alone, and allowed it asstandard$when combined withnational OR regional...#158cleaner productionso that it no longer has to be combined withsustainable OR green OR eco...eco-tourism,eco-building$and `bio-econom*´ as synonyms for the one-word variant #148lifestyles$ / life-styles$to be combined in phrases ("sustainable lifestyle$" OR "sustainable life style$" OR "green lifestyle$" OR "eco lifestyle$" OR "environmental lifestyle$") to avoid medical results.Target 12.2
loggingas stand-alone). Moved forest terms (*forest* OR woodland*) so that they have to be combined with sustainable + management/use terms, rather than alone with sustainable terms. Addedminingas a natural resource use term. Added"resource us*" OR "usage" OR "practice$"to the management/use terms. #154 . Moved"consumption" OR "consume$" OR "consumer$"from phrase 3 to phrase 1&2."consumption" OR "consume$" OR "consumer$"from phrase 3 to phrase 1&2 ("design*" OR "technolog*"were removed). Moved ecolabelling terms so that they have to be combined with natural resources. #154 . Addedeco-label$as a synonym for the one-word variant. #148 .land OR soilmoved to be combined with"resources" OR "minerals". A number of "loss" and "rubbish" terms were removed - other targets cover this and it is not part of the interpretation.Target 12.3
legume$Target 12.4
Clarified the interpretation. Most changes from #150
life NEAR/3 cyclechanged to"lifecycle$" OR "life cycle$", mainly added noise from cycle life of batteries. Added"utilisa*" OR "utiliza*"to the use terms andsafety OR safelyto the sustainable terms. Standardised the management terms between phrase 1 and 2 - phrase 1 is now"lifecycle$" OR "life cycle$" OR "end of life" OR "management" OR "handling" OR "packaging" OR "labelling" OR "storage" OR "storing" OR "stored" OR "disposal" OR "dispose$" OR "transport*" OR "process*" OR "use$" OR "using" OR "utilisa*" OR "utiliza*" OR "production". The terms"cradle to cradle" OR "cradle-to-cradle" OR "lifecycle analysis" OR "life cycle analysis" OR "lifecycle assessment$" OR "life cycle assessment$"have been added/moved so that they are no longer required to be combined with sustainable terms.safety OR safelyto the sustainable terms. Standardised the management terms between phrases 1 and 2 - phrase 2 is now"lifecycle$" OR "life cycle$" OR "end of life" OR "management" OR "handling" OR "packaging" OR "labelling" OR "storage" OR "storing" OR "stored" OR "disposal" OR "dispose$" OR "transport*" OR "process*" OR "incinerat*" OR "combust*" OR "collect*" OR "treatment" OR "sorting" OR "sorted". Removed the superfluous full convention names. The terms"cradle to cradle" OR "cradle-to-cradle" OR "lifecycle analysis" OR "life cycle analysis" OR "lifecycle assessment$" OR "life cycle assessment$"have been added/moved to be with the recycling terms (no longer required to be combined with sustainable terms).NOTstatement to"lead to"Target 12.5
Relatively large changes to structure - for conversion to python check the whole string, rather than just these notes.
eliminateas an action term. Topic - Relatively large structural change that changes the focus away from waste generally, to reductions in waste and waste generation - see the string itself for changes.urban OR cities OR manufacturing OR industr*as waste type terms. Added"agrowaste" OR "solid waste$"as waste terms.life NEAR/3 cyclechanged to"lifecycle$" OR "life cycle$", mainly added noise from cycle life of batteries. Addedzero-wasteas a stand-alone term. Addedrecycl* OR re cycl*so that they can be combined withsustainable OR environmental..... Added"lifecycle$" OR "life cycle$" OR "cradle to cradle" OR "cradle-to-cradle" OR "material footprint" OR "resource footprint"with the recycing terms. Limited some of the more generic terms -"bioeconom*" OR "production" OR "produce$" OR "product$" OR "consumption" OR "consume$" OR "consumer$" OR "packaging" OR "matter" OR "biomass"by limiting what they are combined with. Forcedcleaner productionandresource efficiencyto be used in combination with waste terms (#157). Altered one of the NEAR/5 to NEAR/15.Target 12.6
eco-building$as a synonym for the one-word variant #148cleaner productionso that it no longer has to be combined withsustainable OR green OR eco...corporate OR "industrial sector$" OR "commercial sector$" OR "logistics sector$" OR "manufacturing sector$"to the companies terms. Dropped superfluous"energy efficien*"term. #151 and #90corporate OR "industrial sector$" OR "commercial sector$" OR "logistics sector$" OR "manufacturing sector$"to the companies terms."environmental information disclosure"as a phrase, and"disclos*"as a synonym to "publish"Target 12.7
circularas a sustainability term. Changedresponsib*to"socially responsible" OR "social responsibilit*"- #87"green public procurement$" OR "circular public procurement$"as standalone termstendertotender$Target 12.8
Major changes here - in the structure, interpretation and terminology. More terms have been added for SCP (from 12.1); the interpretation has been tightened and thus terms for psychology and behaviour are removed; various phrases for education for sustainable development are added as a stand-alone phrase (phrase 1) (#91). These changes have removed some of the noisy results about health (#88).
eco-building$andeco-label*as a synonym for the one-word variant - note that here there was also an error that was fixed (ecobuildin$) #148 .lifestyleshas been added as suggested in #164.Target 12.a
Edited interpretation to focus on capacity, rather than scientific and technological capabilities. Also did some major changes to the capacity terms - now these are the same between both phrases.
cleaner productionso that it no longer has to be combined withsustainable OR green OR eco.... Addedeco-tourism,eco-building$andbio-econom*as synonyms for the one-word variant #148 . Narrowedlifestyles$ / life-styles$to be combined in phrases ("sustainable lifestyle$" OR "sustainable life style$" OR "green lifestyle$" OR "eco lifestyle$" OR "environmental lifestyle$") to avoid medical results.energy transitionsandhydropower(#156 and #92 ). Added action terms to the action approach (same as phrase 1).Target 12.b
survey*as a monitoring term.Target 12.c
Interpretation altered in topic - removed rationalising/reforming so that the string covers subsities/tax + fossil fuels. Action retains rationalising/reforming, now more tightly linked to the tax/subsidy terms.
conventional energyas a term for fossil fuels.subsidyin the subsidy termsNOT TS=("heavy duty" OR "light duty" OR "medium duty")