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5.1, Paragraph 3, Sentence 3: Replace "sections" with "clauses", or change wording #89

Open ERyan71258 opened 7 months ago

ERyan71258 commented 7 months ago

The sentence states: As is explained further in the appropriate sections of this document, the structure of the KDM has been designed to allow this without the recipient having stores of root certificates.

Change "sections" to "clauses", or streamline as follows: As described further in this document, the structure of the KDM has been designed to allow this without the recipient having stores of root certificates.