Open ERyan71258 opened 7 months ago
How does one convey to the reader in an informative section that something should be done?
It is a tough one: To preserve intended security, full KDM information access ought to take place only within a secure environment (e.g., within a D-Cinema Secure Processing Block).
Or perhaps it should be placed in a normative clause.
Or perhaps it should be placed in a normative clause.
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Overall, we should avoid informative clauses (which are not permitted by ISO) -- ofc other than annexes and those clauses that are by design informative, e.g., introduction.
The sentence states: To preserve intended security, full KDM information access should only take place within a secure environment (e.g., within a D-Cinema Secure Processing Block).
For preciseness, move "only" as follows: To preserve intended security, full KDM information access should take place only within a secure environment (e.g., within a D-Cinema Secure Processing Block).
Also: Replace "should". Clause 5 is informative; therefore, "should" cannot be used.