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Sandia Interactive Wave Energy Education Display (SIWEED)
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Paper Proofreading #113

Open nickross4444 opened 1 year ago

nickross4444 commented 1 year ago

The paper has reached a completed state. In this issue, could we(@Anwi505 @DeepFriedDerp @ryancoe) post our revision suggestions before submitting?

siweedPaper.pdf

ryancoe commented 1 year ago

@nickross4444 - Great stuff. Please see suggested changes here: siweedPaper.pdf. I'd like to do one more round of reviews before submission.

@DeepFriedDerp @Anwi505 @delaneyheileman @stespenc83 @gbacelli - Please add any additional comments by 3/24 COB.

stespenc83 commented 1 year ago

@nickross4444 Sorry for not getting around to commenting on time. If it's not too late, I would say it looks like it could use a summarizing paragraph at the end. It felt like it ended very abruptly. Maybe recap the primary achievements, major lessons learned, and potential future work.

nickross4444 commented 1 year ago

My sincere apologies for the delay. Attached and pushed is the revised paper. siweedPaper.pdf