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Sage-Bionetworks / sage-monorepo

Where OpenChallenges, Schematic, and other Sage open source apps are built
https://sage-bionetworks.github.io/sage-monorepo/
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[Enhancement] Use action words in OC description #1827

Closed vpchung closed 1 year ago

vpchung commented 1 year ago

Sage Design feedback

Current description on home page:

OpenChallenges strives to provide a centralized hub of biomedical challenges from various hosting organizations. Our goal is to empower both participants with the most up-to-date information about relevant challenges, as well as organizers with standardized challenge templates and intelligence.

Does this mean OpenChallenges is still working towards this goal or has it already been accomplished?

Maybe instead of "strives" and "our goal", say something more TA-DAH! WE DID IT. e.g.

"OpenChallenges provides a centralized hub... We empower both participants..."

tschaffter commented 1 year ago

I agree with this suggestion. As the first thing that users would read, I would make this paragraph shorter and use simpler/more impactful words.

Here is a modified version of it that I used in the email sent to Team Sage. We can still do better.

OpenChallenges aims to be a centralized hub for biomedical challenges and more. It provides participants with the most up-to-date information about relevant challenges, and organizers with standardized challenge event templates and intelligence.