Closed earlgreyincarnate closed 4 years ago
The first issue is more a matter of style than grammatical correctness - however, I agree that the first example in particular sounds better with "who", so I'm going fix that.
For stutters, our current style is to repeat the first letter only.
And now for the specific examples:
lol, nice catch - fixed
Thanks for these! Glad you're enjoying the episode.
1. Is that when you are examining in evidence by any chance? The fountain pen gets updated a lot, so I wanna make sure here!
Yes, that's correct. Thanks!
Here are some typos and grammar issues from episode 1.
The following lines contain the use of the pronoun "that" when it should be the pronoun "who," because the pronoun is referring to a person:
The following lines contain examples of stutters where the first letter doesn't produce the actual phonetic effect desired. I am not sure if you would want to change these or not, but they're a bit awkward to read:
Here are some other incidental things I noticed:
Thanks! Great job with this episode. I loved playing it.