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wording changes in About page #12

Closed sarahstrong314 closed 2 years ago

sarahstrong314 commented 2 years ago

"in seven provinces" -> "across seven provinces" (removing ambiguity) "raising awareness for the sport and the speedcubing community " -> "raising awareness of our local speedcubing communities" (improving a run-on sentence) "working to run competitions in more provinces and territories" -> "continuing to run competitions in Canada and bringing them to more provinces and territories" (clearer)