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The official Red Hat guide to writing clear, concise, and consistent technical documentation.
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Glance and Maven examples are written as titles instead of sentences #586

Open jdandrea opened 4 days ago

jdandrea commented 4 days ago

https://github.com/StyleGuides/WritingStyleGuide/blob/1604485f16a472b329a43551ba561ecd8b7416c4/en-US/Translation.xml#L628-L629

Suggestion: Replace the example with "Troubleshoot Glance.", and the improvement with "Troubleshoot the Glance image service."

https://github.com/StyleGuides/WritingStyleGuide/blob/1604485f16a472b329a43551ba561ecd8b7416c4/en-US/Translation.xml#L633-L634

Suggestion: Replace the example with "Install the maven-changelog-plugin.", and the improvement with "Install the maven-changelog-plugin package."