Jake's copyediting, including change to make sequence elements optional

SynBioDex / SBOL-specification

The Synthetic Biology Open Language (SBOL)

http://sbolstandard.org

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Jake's copyediting, including change to make sequence elements optional #358

Closed jakebeal closed 4 years ago

cjmyers commented 4 years ago

Looks good, but I saw one \todo still

cjmyers commented 4 years ago

Ok, looks good to me

jakebeal commented 4 years ago

@cjmyers I've finished my proof-reading pass, which has added a bunch of additional modifications; please review.

cjmyers commented 4 years ago

Looks good. I see you revised the provenance examples. This was a problematic area I noticed, since the examples make less sense without XML. I actually asked the editors about adding UML diagrams for them. If they do get this done, we can always update the text to reflect them.